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Submitted: March 16, 2012
Image Size: 393 KB
Resolution: 950×629
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Make:NIKON CORPORATION
Model:NIKON D7000
Shutter Speed:1/160 second
Aperture:F/8.0
Focal Length:24 mm
ISO Speed:100
Date Taken:Nov 12, 2011, 4:27:04 PM
Software:Adobe Photoshop CS5.1 Windows

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Forgotten Lands IIby *MaximeDaviron

Photography / Animals, Plants & Nature / Landscapes

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Critique by ~Suppi-lu-liuma Mar 16, 2012, 8:43:02 AM

A handsome panorama indeed. I personally liked the contrast and crispness. Nonetheless, I feel like the top and bottom parts are different in nature and might have given this impression of lacking contrast and cripness as the bottom part seems to give no additional flavor, and doesn't contribute much to the composition either. That's why I may suggest giving a try to crop slightly from the bottom.

As for the framing, frankly I hesitate. The main summit has rather a central position. I wonder whther it could be possible to place it further to the east? Just an idea.

Did you use a polariser? As such the sky looks nicely darkened.

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Erdem

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~mutazoid Oct 7, 2012 Hobbyist Photographer

Fantastic!

~Zireael07 Sep 2, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

Love the way the clouds seem to spurt from the mountain...

~zajin Sep 2, 2012

Nice!!!

*lombregrise May 10, 2012 Professional Writer

sur mon journal

*MaximeDaviron May 10, 2012 Photographer

Merci à toi

*JuliesToe Mar 31, 2012

Punaise ! C'est vraiment "fort" comme photographie, on est complètement plongé dedans. En même temps c'est vraiment paisible, ça donne envie d'y être !

*MaximeDaviron Mar 31, 2012 Photographer

Merci

~FlorentCourty Mar 26, 2012

Celle là, elle me plaît

Parfois jadis tu avais tendance à ne pas assez contraster/détailler les noir et blancs (à mon goût bien sûr), mais là, ça me semble nickel.

*MaximeDaviron Mar 26, 2012 Photographer

Oui je me souviens bien d'une époque (qu'on a tous connu je crois) où faire du paysage en noir et blanc était un défi x) Ca commence à dater mine de rien, c'était l'époque de la vallée des orages ... Ça passe vite n'empêche !

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*Bojkovski Mar 21, 2012 Hobbyist Photographer

excellent work
great clarity and contrasts

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